【高分必殺技】Lena老師 IELTS雅思寫作Part 2
這一篇我們著重在文章內容的鋪陳方式和寫作技巧。
【寫作方向】
下筆之前應該先快速找出下列訊息2.確認圖上的資訊 X=Sales / Y=Years
3.找出最大最小值 Highest and Lowest
4.找出特殊情況 Suddenly dropped?
5.比較差異 Sales of coffee has increased over the years while sales of banana remained steady. The result indicates a growth of coffee demand and a change in consumer behavior.
【文章鋪陳】
文章的鋪陳方式可分為以下幾個步驟：
1.一句話開頭
2.一到二句話說明整體趨勢
3.深入討論最大最小值以及特殊情況
4.稍微提及次要資訊(或不提)
5.一句話總結
2.一到二句話說明整體趨勢
3.深入討論最大最小值以及特殊情況
4.稍微提及次要資訊(或不提)
5.一句話總結
＊英文例句如下：
1. The line graph shows the change of stock price from January to March.
2. The majority (56%) of visitors chose to stay in a resort while hotel (28%) and bed & breakfast (12%) represented the second and third preferences.
3. There was a dramatic increase in employee turnover from 2% to 14%.
4. The rise was particularly noticeable after the strike, during which time many employees had serious conflict with their employers.
5. As a result, the residence will continue to suffer from air pollution, with regulation and government policy remaining unclear.
【自我測驗】(參考答案在文章最下方)
The sample table shows the percentage of students who came to school on foot, by bicycle, car or public transportation, at Jane Young College in the year 2012-2013.
Walking
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9%
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Bicycle
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23%
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Car
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22%
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Public Transportation
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46%
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【常用單字】
名詞
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動詞
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短語
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A rise
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rose
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To show an upward trend
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An increase
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increased
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To hit the highest point
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A growth
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grew
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To grow significantly
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A peak
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peaked
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To reach a peak
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A fluctuation
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fluctuated
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To show some fluctuation
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A variation
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varied
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To vary continuously
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A plateau
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plateaued
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To stay constant
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A fall
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fell
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To fell considerably
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A decrease
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decreased
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To show a downward trend
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A decline
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declined
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To hit the lowest point
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A drop
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dropped
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To dive suddenly
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【自我測驗參考答案】
The table demonstrates the percentage of transportation used by students when going to school at Jane Young College from 2012 to 2013. The majority of students (46%) took public transportation while walking to school was the least favorite (9%) of all. Moreover, the amount of bicycle users (23%) were pretty close to car users (22%). In summary, public transportation was a convenient and popular choice among students of Jane Young College.
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